Rough Cut 2 Feedback

We received some feedback from our target audience age on our second rough cut in order to work out what we need to improve with our final cut. Feedback was received from the rest of the media class and a form group.

Feedback from 16/17 year olds

Good feedback:

• They like the pan at the beginning and the use of music
• The sound quality is good- you can tell what the characters are saying without the volume being too low
• They said there was a good variety of camera shots
• Good use of mise-en-scene with costume and setting

Improvements/other:

• Pacing needs to be made a bit faster
• The font of the titles could be changed

Feedback from 15/16 year olds

Good feedback:

• Most of them said they would want to see the rest of it
• They said the scene was established well
• The camera was steady
• Good use of sound

Improvements/other:

• Not everyone would've wanted to see the rest- this shows how not everyone will enjoy our film opening
• They hoped the pace would pick up

Feedback from 13yr old

Good feedback:

• Actors spoke loud and clearly, could understand them.
• Liked the funny costumes
• How they sat altogether near the tent - like a circle of friendship.

Improvements:

• Make the actors learn their lines more beforhand
• To see who was on the other side of the phone.

We will use this information in order to make changes and improvements necessary for our final piece in order to create the best film opening possible with what we have.

-Leyla Cindil, Sian Hayler-Magenis.